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Friday, February 21, 2014

Harun (introduction)

Author : M. Harun Ar-Rasyid

Narrative Paragraph
Main Idea                    : My childhood accident.
Topic Sentence            : I will never forget my childhood accident.
Supporting Ideas         :
-          Morning: I played “hide and seek” in the woods with my friends, it was my turn to look for them.
-          Noon: my turn to hide, instead of being founded by my friend, I was founded by the British armies.
-          I was being asked rudely where my village was, I struggled and didn’t want to answer.
-          I was getting beaten up, and being left unconscious.
-          Evening: I woke up, rushed to the village and saw it on fire.
-          I ran to my house and found it too late, my house was burned to ash and there was no survivor.
Concluding sentence   : I will never forget that day, and I will make them responsible for what they did.


A CHILD IN VENGEANCE
I will never forget my childhood accident. That day, on the morning, I was out to play “hide and seek” in the woods with my friends. After picking up match stick, I was the one that got to count and look for them. It took me a while to find them. It was already at noon when I managed to find them all. Then it was my turn to hide. After waiting in hiding for a while, they found me. Not my friend, but the British armies. I was then forced to come out from my hiding and being rudely asked about my village’s whereabouts. I struggled and didn’t want to answer them. Then suddenly they started to beat me up and left me unconscious. The sky had gone dark when I woke up. Then I rushed to my village and saw it on fire. I ran to my house and found it too late. My house was burned to ash and my family was no more. I will never forget that day and I will make them responsible for what they did.

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