Author : M. Harun Ar-Rasyid
Narrative Paragraph
Main Idea : My childhood accident.
Topic Sentence : I will never forget my childhood
accident.
Supporting Ideas :
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Morning: I played “hide and seek” in the woods with my friends, it was
my turn to look for them.
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Noon: my turn to hide, instead of being founded by my friend, I was
founded by the British armies.
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I was being asked rudely where my village was, I struggled and didn’t
want to answer.
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I was getting beaten up, and being left unconscious.
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Evening: I woke up, rushed to the village and saw it on fire.
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I ran to my house and found it too late, my house was burned to ash and
there was no survivor.
Concluding sentence : I will never forget that day, and I will
make them responsible for what they did.
A CHILD IN VENGEANCE
I will never forget my childhood accident. That
day, on the morning, I was out to play “hide and seek” in the woods with my
friends. After picking up match stick, I was the one that got to count and look
for them. It took me a while to find them. It was already at noon when I
managed to find them all. Then it was my turn to hide. After waiting in hiding
for a while, they found me. Not my friend, but the British armies. I was then
forced to come out from my hiding and being rudely asked about my village’s
whereabouts. I struggled and didn’t want to answer them. Then suddenly they
started to beat me up and left me unconscious. The sky had gone dark when I
woke up. Then I rushed to my village and saw it on fire. I ran to my house and
found it too late. My house was burned to ash and my family was no more. I will
never forget that day and I will make them responsible for what they did.
wooooowwwwww....
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