Two
years ago, when I was in the second grade of senior high school I was
learned about digestive system in my biology class. My teacher, Mrs. Asri
Istiana was explaining about human and animal digestive system. It is very
interesting, moreover the digestive system of cow called ruminant. Why? because
it is the most unique process than the other does. The explanation below will
give you more information about why ruminant should work twice for doing
digestion than human.
An adult human and ruminant has
the same number of teeth, all of them are 32 teeth. Even though they
have similarities about the number
of the teeth there are some differences which described in the chart
below.
Ruminant teeth’s structure
3
|
3
|
0
|
0
|
0
|
0
|
0
|
0
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Upper jawbone
|
M
|
P
|
C
|
I
|
I
|
C
|
P
|
M
|
Types of teeth
|
3
|
3
|
0
|
4
|
4
|
0
|
3
|
3
|
Lower jawbone
|
Human teeth’s structure
3
|
2
|
1
|
2
|
2
|
1
|
2
|
3
|
Upper jawbone
|
M
|
P
|
C
|
I
|
I
|
C
|
P
|
M
|
Types of teeth
|
3
|
2
|
1
|
2
|
2
|
1
|
2
|
3
|
Lower jawbone
|
I = incisor
C = canine
P = premolar
M = molar
C = canine
P = premolar
M = molar
The chart showed us about the structure of the human and ruminant
teeth. as you see, all of number are different for example ruminant doesn’t
have any canines and upper incisors (0) but they have more molar and premolar
teeth, why? Because they need
those teeth for chewing fibrous foods such as leaves and grass. This is also a
reason why ruminant don’t need to have canines teeth because they don’t eat any
meat like human does.
Ingestion and digestion process
of human and ruminant are similar, after human doing ingestion the bolus (a pellet of food) will
move through the gullet (oesophagus) to the stomach and move again through the
intestines and out through the anus. But, you will find the different
thing from ruminant digestive process like the stomach. This is different with human’s stomach because it is
big and consists of 4 parts, those are: rumen as the receiving station
of the food, reticulum as the place for chemical process which changed the food
become bolus, omasum will grind the food after ruminant re-chew the bolus,
abomasum is the last part of the stomach which will digest the food using
bacteria to produce enzyme cellulose.
From all of
explanation above, we know that human and ruminant are similar. Both of them
are mammal, they have same respiratory organ system, they have little bit
differences in digestive organ system, same number of teeth but not the
structure and they don’t have same stomach, they have to work twice (chewing their food) for
completing their digestion so that’s why the way ruminant eat is
different with human.
Nadia, I think it is better to provide the picture of the teeth....
ReplyDeleteNice topic, and thank you for this informative essay... :)
Oh ya, you need to pay more attention in capitalization and punctuation...
nice topic... biology is very interesting and challenging to talk about,
ReplyDeleteand, I agree with robet, a picture will help much in this essay.
still, you need to be very careful about your grammar (subject-verb agreement, active-passive,preposition), structure (parallelism, complex sentence) and punctuation..
about the content, your introduction reads like an announcement; "The explanation below will give you more information about..." and mem Indah has told us that it's actually not really good to have announcement in the intro.
and your thesis statement "why ruminant should work twice for doing digestion than human" doesnt really sound like comparison-contrast essay but kind of cause-effect..
about the second body paragraph, you need to state clearly the similarities between the two because I still do not get it.
for addition, the bacteria is called "ruminococcus albus" breaking down the cellulose and you should state that a ruminant chews the food twice.
in the concluding paragraph, you mention "respiratory organ", this brings a new idea that's not related to the topic explained..
Thank you :)
Nadia again nadia again,, :D, again yo made some silly mistakes in SV agrrement. For example, to make a past form, you need not to add any to be. "I was learned" should be "I learned". I emphasize it to make u focus on this.
DeleteSometimes, in this essay you need to put word connector instead of putting comma.
One left...
why do yo use a question mark frequently? I was feeling a bit you're delivering speech,,, hahahah, but interesting topic. Good Job Nadia...